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Sorne people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is generally considered that foreign
language
 is learnt only for
travelling different
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travelling to different
 countries or finding
job
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jobs
.
On the other hand
, tiny group of people
suppose
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supposes
 that learning a foreign
language
 is leading in various aspects
such
 as doing research on something. As far as I am concerned, learning a
second
language
 can be very significant for every subject in the World.
To begin
 with, most people’s thought is that foreign
language
 is used only in journeys or in
works
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the works
. These people believe that foreign
language
 cannot be useful in their living space because in most places people do not prefer speaking foreign
language even
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language, even
 learning
second
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a second language
language
 is argued that unnecessary in some countries and companies. As a good illustration for
this
, most people who live in France never speak another
language
 as thinking insignificant.
On the other hand
, some people considered that learning
language
is
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are
 very important because they believe that
language
 ensure not only travel or work in another country but
also
 opportunity of benefit different
sources
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source
 countries.
Besides
, probably people who suppose that
this
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This
 idea is live in multinational
countries so
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countries, so
 they need to learn different languages to communicate with each other.
Consequently
, it seems to me that people should learn different
language
 excepting their mother tongue because learning
language
 provides different opportunşties for people.
For instance
, people who know more than one
language
 can benefit from different sources when they do research on their subjects or homework.
Hence
, learning
language
 is a necessity for both travel or work in different countries and discover new possibilities.
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