In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is no doubt that modern gadgets

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different types of laptops are

become

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becoming

increasingly popular day by day all over the world

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It is expected that in the future

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individuals will read their favourite books or newspapers online for free

instead

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of purchasing printed copies

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I do not support

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idea since it is my firm belief that traditional paper-books have

important role

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an important role

in most part of people's life and e books are not always comfortable for all of us

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The main reason why

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view is opposed is that electronic books have some adverse effects on people's life

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What

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mean is that using devices like mobile phones or computers causes harmful effects to their eyes and has other effects on people's health mentally and physically.

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, especially for youngsters

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such

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technological gadgets weaken make their eyes and it

also

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causes headache when they read more from

screen

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the screen

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due to arguments listed above

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can reaffirm my view that online newspapers and books can not replace printed materials

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that not everyone is able to

use

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their own laptops or computers could be another reason why still most part of individuals

use

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traditional books

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A good illustration of

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could be that every family can have enough money to purchase own mobile phone and not everyone is able to

use

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them

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especially

older generation

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the older generation

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A huge number of older people could not

use

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modern technologies and it is very inconvenient for them to read news or other information online

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believe that according to the choice of many people

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online media can not take the place of traditional printings. In conclusion,

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I have to admit that reading online books have lots of advantages to people in terms of cheaper price than the printed ones

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the way I tend to believe that even though traditional printed books and magazines may be familiar and vital in our life for an extremely long period of time for

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of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

certain benefits

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with

this

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statement?

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7
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
28
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

383 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

printed books
newspapers
online reading
digital content
paywall
accessibility
convenience
cost-saving
environmental impact
traditional reading experience
ownership
personal connection
reliability
credibility
digital divide
accessibility issues

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The best way that a government can reduce the traffic congestion in cities is to provide public transport free of cost to people 24 hours a day and 7 days a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?