In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #books #newspapers

There is no doubt that modern gadgets

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different types of laptops are

become

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becoming

increasingly popular day by day all over the world

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It is expected that in the future

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individuals will read their favourite books or newspapers online for free

instead

of purchasing printed copies

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I do not support

this

idea since it is my firm belief that traditional paper-books have

important role

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an important role

in most part of people's life and e books are not always comfortable for all of us

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The main reason why

this

view is opposed is that electronic books have some adverse effects on people's life

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What

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mean is that using devices like mobile phones or computers causes harmful effects to their eyes and has other effects on people's health mentally and physically.

For instance

, especially for youngsters

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such

technological gadgets weaken make their eyes and it

also

causes headache when they read more from

screen

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the screen

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Thus

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due to arguments listed above

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refers to the speaker or writer

can reaffirm my view that online newspapers and books can not replace printed materials

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Also

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that not everyone is able to

use

their own laptops or computers could be another reason why still most part of individuals

use

traditional books

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A good illustration of

this

could be that every family can have enough money to purchase own mobile phone and not everyone is able to

use

them

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especially

older generation

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the older generation

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A huge number of older people could not

use

modern technologies and it is very inconvenient for them to read news or other information online

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Thus

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refers to the speaker or writer

believe that according to the choice of many people

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online media can not take the place of traditional printings. In conclusion,

although

I have to admit that reading online books have lots of advantages to people in terms of cheaper price than the printed ones

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the way I tend to believe that even though traditional printed books and magazines may be familiar and vital in our life for an extremely long period of time for

it's

of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"

its

certain benefits

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with

this

statement?

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4 paragraphs

383 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

printed books
newspapers
online reading
digital content
paywall
accessibility
convenience
cost-saving
environmental impact
traditional reading experience
ownership
personal connection
reliability
credibility
digital divide
accessibility issues

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In the future, nobody will buy printed books and newspapers because they will be able to read everything online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The tradition of families getting together to eat meals is disappearing. What are the reasons? What are the impacts?

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, most people try to balance between work and other part of lives, Unfortunately, not many achive this balance. What are the problems of this? Suggest some solutions to solve the problems?

Nowadays, goverments are trying to encourage people to use buses or subways for their daily travel. What are the advantages of forms of public transport like these?