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Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In years gone by, digital platforms have been significantly developed by
spreading
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 of
internet
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to
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all around the world.
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 network enables a new industry
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 brings interesting devices, various
softwares
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software
 and lots of mobile applications.
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, writing
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 is partially forgotten.
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 days, as far as I know, especially handwritten
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 are rarely using when we compare them with printed
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 these tools via comparisons. When I
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 a freshman at the university, people used to communicate
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each other
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 by
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produced by printers were using just in legal conditions.
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,
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 were dividing into two
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categories
, either handwritten or digital copy.
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 as informal and formal, respectively. After a while, Android and IOS
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software
 are devised. These bring billions of mobile applications
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 as Whatsapp, Facetime, Viber etc.
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, most of
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 duties have
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committed
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.
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, society forgot
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 gradually. Because
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 still in
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 and there are some kinds of needs to
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 them. I would argue that every situation whichever
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 writing
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 is old fashion and digital means are easily and cheaply handle all matters in communication.
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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