IELTS Writing Correction Service /
Writing Samples /
Band 4.5

Many people feel that students should learn from online materials while others feel that it is better to use printed materials. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

#people #students #materials
In recent years, technology has developed significantly to make people’s lives easier.
Then
, many people argue that children nowadays are better to study from online while some
also
 believe that using handout is better for a better education. We
can not
can not
cannot
 avoid that these methods have their own benefits and drawbacks. It is good to know more about these two methods. One the one hand, online materials are more in demand because of their effectiveness. Since
this
 modern era, students can get many materials from the internet. They do not have to look for some certain books as well. The internet
also
 provides some tutorials and explanations for maths and
science so
Accept comma addition
science, so
 the students can study from there and they can
also
 repeat the explanations if they do not still understand. After that, we can
also
 just save the materials to our laptops and gadgets so that you can open the materials anywhere. I usually
also
 search some lessons on the internet to be more
understand
Suggestion
understanding
 on how to solve problems and it is very useful.
On the other hand
, handouts are still being used for many students from around the world. Many teachers still give their
students
Suggestion
student
 handout for giving the lessons.
Eventhough
Suggestion
Even though
 it is quite effective, but many students often lose their handouts because printed materials are easier to be wrecked. But, handouts are
also
 easier to use and my school
also use
Suggestion
also uses
is also using
 printed materials for their students to teach the students. Using printed materials
also
 decrease the number of
tree
Suggestion
trees
 from all around the world. In conclusion, I believe that studying from online is more effective rather than using printed materials. Since we can look for certain subjects, we can
also
 decrease the using of paper and save trees.
Submitted by kelvin conorus on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: