In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In few nations,
government
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the government
has set rules where no one could stop
any one
any person
anyone
for those who are seeking for
job
,
inspite
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in spite
of their
age
limits and
this
thought of
government
is an open door for all, I think that
government
's wide
mindedness
in better option for all citizens who live there.
On the other hand
,
this
rule of
government
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the government
decrease
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decreases
the number of unemployment
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
also
reduces the poverty ratio within the country. Because
this
opportunity encourage to all those who are willing to work independently, they can work
inspite
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in spite
of
thier
of them or themselves
their
over
too old to be useful
overage
age
if they find themselves strong enough. It's
also
positive impression for those countries where
age factor
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the age factor
becomes the main hindrance in
job
seeking.
For example
, in
overseas country
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an overseas country
overseas countries
the overseas country
,
Accept space
,
like USA people can get a
job
according to
thier
of them or themselves
their
choice even they have crossed of
age
60s. I believe that
this
idea of
government
is very beneficial to maintain a healthy lifestyle as well as a peaceful family life.
On the other hand
, there could be restricted
on
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to
age
limits in applying for
job
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a job
the job
, reason that if people working in
government
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the government
set up, if they don't leave the seat for
new young generation
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a new young generation, then
a new young generation then
then
it would be
great loss
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a great loss
for the country as well as it becomes burdensome
for
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to
the family where young people are growing up. And they could be without any
job
if
government
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the government
doesn't open any vacancy for them.
For instance
, In India there is
a
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an
age
limits
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limit
in applying for certain
government
job
even
few
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fewer
in some private sectors too are very much restricted to
this
rules
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rule
. I believe that
this
restrictions
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restriction
on
age
for applying
job
doesn't foster in life
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
time. In conclusion, by rights no law should be applied
on
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at
age
for people who seek
job
this
rule is
better option
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the better option
a better option
and that should be encouraged to do many more
countries so
Accept comma addition
countries, so
that poverty and
hungerness
a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation
hungers
could be
eliminate
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eliminated
and give growth more, as it boosts people to work hard.
instead
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Instead
of being stuck with the rule of
age
limits and after over aged many experience the
idealness
conforming to an ultimate standard of perfection or excellence; embodying an ideal
ideals
and unworthy ness.
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  • age discrimination
  • inclusive workplace
  • workplace diversity
  • workforce experience
  • equality in hiring
  • age-related stereotypes
  • demographic changes
  • economic growth
  • social security systems
  • consumer spending
  • non-discriminatory policies
  • bias
  • fair practices
  • retirement age
  • intergenerational collaboration
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