In some countries it is now illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In few nations,
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government
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the government
has set rules where no one could stop
any one
any person
anyone
for those who are seeking for
job
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,
inspite
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in spite
of their
age
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limits and
this
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thought of
government
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is an open door for all, I think that
government
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's wide
mindedness
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in better option for all citizens who live there.
On the other hand
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,
this
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rule of
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government
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the government
decrease
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decreases
the number of unemployment
and and
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
also
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reduces the poverty ratio within the country. Because
this
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opportunity encourage to all those who are willing to work independently, they can work
inspite
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in spite
of
thier
of them or themselves
their
over
too old to be useful
overage
age
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if they find themselves strong enough. It's
also
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positive impression for those countries where
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age factor
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the age factor
becomes the main hindrance in
job
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seeking.
For example
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, in
overseas country
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an overseas country
overseas countries
the overseas country
,
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,
like USA people can get a
job
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according to
thier
of them or themselves
their
choice even they have crossed of
age
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60s. I believe that
this
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idea of
government
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is very beneficial to maintain a healthy lifestyle as well as a peaceful family life.
On the other hand
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, there could be restricted
on
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to
age
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limits in applying for
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job
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a job
the job
, reason that if people working in
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government
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the government
set up, if they don't leave the seat for
new young generation
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a new young generation, then
a new young generation then
then
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it would be
great loss
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a great loss
for the country as well as it becomes burdensome
for
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to
the family where young people are growing up. And they could be without any
job
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if
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government
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the government
doesn't open any vacancy for them.
For instance
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, In India there is
a
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an
age
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limits
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limit
in applying for certain
government
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job
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even
few
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fewer
in some private sectors too are very much restricted to
this
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rules
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rule
. I believe that
this
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restrictions
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restriction
on
age
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for applying
job
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doesn't foster in life
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
time. In conclusion, by rights no law should be applied
on
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at
age
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for people who seek
job
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this
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rule is
better option
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the better option
a better option
and that should be encouraged to do many more
countries so
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countries, so
that poverty and
hungerness
a physiological need for food; the consequence of food deprivation
hungers
could be
eliminate
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eliminated
and give growth more, as it boosts people to work hard.
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instead
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Instead
of being stuck with the rule of
age
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limits and after over aged many experience the
idealness
conforming to an ultimate standard of perfection or excellence; embodying an ideal
ideals
and unworthy ness.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • age discrimination
  • inclusive workplace
  • workplace diversity
  • workforce experience
  • equality in hiring
  • age-related stereotypes
  • demographic changes
  • economic growth
  • social security systems
  • consumer spending
  • non-discriminatory policies
  • bias
  • fair practices
  • retirement age
  • intergenerational collaboration
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