Describe a time when you were cheated/ when someone lied to you / someone did not tell you the complete truth - What was the occasion/ What the situation was? - When this happened? - Who was the person? - What did he hide about? - Why do you think the person did not tell the whole truth?

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👉 Well, life is full of experiences. There are lots of situations when people don't
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complete
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the complete
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truth
or
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lied
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lie
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to you or hide anything
due to
some reason. 👉 Here, I would like to talk about a time when I bought a
blow
dryer
. 👉 Actually a couple of months ago, I went to a shop which is a stone's throw away from my hometown. 👉 I asked
to
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the shopkeeper about a
blow
dryer
and he gave me a closed box. 👉 When I was checking the product I asked the salesman whether it was a brand new one or not. 👉
Then
he was not allowing me to open the box and he told me that it was a fresh piece. 👉 So I took that
blow
dryer
. 👉
However
, when I opened the box after reaching my home. 👉 I found the bundle of hair in the back side of the
dryer
and
that
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time I felt cheated because it was not a fresh piece
and
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👉 Unfortunately, I paid the full amount which was the new
blow
dryer
. 👉 The shopkeeper tricked me and
hand
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over a second-hand used
blow
dryer
for me. 👉 So I went to the mall to get my money back and at that time I was furious,
although
I controlled myself and
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like a civilized person. 👉 I told him that it was a used one and he checked the product and apologized to me. 👉
However
, I know very well that he was just pretending to be innocent. 👉 He told me that I could have another
blow
dryer
I simply denied his advice as I did not want to trust him again. 👉
And
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he
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He
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violated the
customer
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customer's
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right as he
hides
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the information about the product to earn profit. 👉
Finally
, he gave me my money back and after reaching my home, I wrote about
this
incident on the company website so that
such
incident
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will
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would
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not happen to anyone.
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