Describe a time when you were cheated/ when someone lied to you / someone did not tell you the complete truth - What was the occasion/ What the situation was? - When this happened? - Who was the person? - What did he hide about? - Why do you think the person did not tell the whole truth?

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👉 Well, life is full of experiences. There are lots of situations when people don't

say

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tell

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complete

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the complete

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truth

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lied

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lie

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to you or hide anything

due to

some reason. 👉 Here, I would like to talk about a time when I bought a

blow

dryer

. 👉 Actually a couple of months ago, I went to a shop which is a stone's throw away from my hometown. 👉 I asked

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the shopkeeper about a

blow

dryer

and he gave me a closed box. 👉 When I was checking the product I asked the salesman whether it was a brand new one or not. 👉

Then

he was not allowing me to open the box and he told me that it was a fresh piece. 👉 So I took that

blow

dryer

. 👉

However

, when I opened the box after reaching my home. 👉 I found the bundle of hair in the back side of the

dryer

and

that

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time I felt cheated because it was not a fresh piece

and

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👉 Unfortunately, I paid the full amount which was the new

blow

dryer

. 👉 The shopkeeper tricked me and

hand

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over a second-hand used

blow

dryer

for me. 👉 So I went to the mall to get my money back and at that time I was furious,

although

I controlled myself and

behave

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like a civilized person. 👉 I told him that it was a used one and he checked the product and apologized to me. 👉

However

, I know very well that he was just pretending to be innocent. 👉 He told me that I could have another

blow

dryer

I simply denied his advice as I did not want to trust him again. 👉

And

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violated the

customer

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customer's

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right as he

hides

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the information about the product to earn profit. 👉

Finally

, he gave me my money back and after reaching my home, I wrote about

this

incident on the company website so that

such

incident

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will

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not happen to anyone.

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

334 words

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