Describe one of your family member you spend the most time with - Who is he/she? - What do you usually do together? - What kind of person he/she is? - Why you spend most of the time with him/her?

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a sweet family who always stays with me through
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thick and thin. 👉 I like all my family members, but here, I would like to talk about one of my family members with whom I love to spend most of
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time
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and he is my
grandfather
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. 👉 Actually, in
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contemporary world most
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the
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people want to live separately from their elders. 👉
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, I am fortunate that my grandparents are living with me and we all are under one roof. 👉 Well, my
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is really close to me and we both spend most of our
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together. 👉 On weekdays in the evening, we play mind games
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as chess, Ludo, sliding
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, etc. In order to do brain exercise,
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on weekends, we play different outdoor games and go to the park which is Stone's throw away from my home. 👉 Well, he believes that being mentally strong is as vital as being fit as a fiddle. 👉 Apart from that, he loves to try different
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whenever one of us
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for
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any particular dish, we immediately search it's recipe
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Google and try to do experiments in the kitchen. 👉
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,
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most of
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time
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we don't cook the dish as delicious as we plan, my
grandfather
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motivates me to keep trying new
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even if we fail at it. 👉
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is a reason I love to spend
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with him. 👉 He
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ready to do creative and crazy
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unlike my family. 👉 Well, the rest of my family members can always be seen busy
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their routine work and they think doing those
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which would not benefit us in the future
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it
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is entirely a waste of
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. 👉
On the other hand
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, my
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has a different perspective, he believes that we should try all those
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which we find amusing. 👉 I am
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like him and that
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us from others. 👉 My loving
grandfather
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never turns down my ideas of doing crazy
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. 👉 That's why, I never miss the boat to spend my
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with him.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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