you recently organised an all day meeting for your company, which look place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhppy about the food that was served for lunch. write a letter to the manger of the hotel.
Dear
Hotel
Manager,
My Name is Parth Patel and I am working in a IT Depart-ment, My company Name is globle Devlopers. In this
letter I willinform yoy that I will arrange my office
meeting know many people in your Hotel
blankit holl. Because of i have many people in your Hotel
Name and your Hotel
testi food
.
This
meeting is very important in my office
and me. there are many office
employees and emlpyer to attened the samenar. Also
In my company Boss and CEO are joined the meeting. First of all, Your hotel
food
and services are very good and also
your hotel
names is very Famous in our city. Your resturant banquet hall is very large and central A.C. The meetingis all day and breck fast and lunch and also
dinner provided your hotel
. All most 100 of people are participants this
semenar.
I have notice to your hotel
staffs are very bad behaviours in my office
workers and second thing your hotel
dinner Food
is very bad test. Their are many employers are compained me. and my boss and CEO are sendwitch also
chaines Food
test are very bad.
I ahve some suggesan in your hotel
to increst your staff and teching about hoe to behavier to other person. Also
your hotel
cooked chenge and joining new cooked. I hope to undertsend my stiuation and incresed your hotel
Food
in your Fututre.
Your
faithfully,
Parth patel.Correct your spelling
Yours
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coherence cohesion
Ensure clarity in writing by organizing thoughts more logically. Use clear paragraphs to separate different ideas or points.
coherence cohesion
Work on the greeting and closing sections of the letter to make them more formal and appropriate for the context.
coherence cohesion
Focus on one idea per paragraph and develop it thoroughly before moving to the next one. This will help maintain logical flow throughout.
task achievement
Address all parts of the prompt fully to enhance the completeness of your response. Ensure you provide detailed feedback about the food and suggest specific improvements.
task achievement
Adopt a more formal writing tone by using appropriate greetings and closings, avoiding colloquial language, and maintaining professionalism throughout the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite