As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

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Technology is developing by leaps and bounds in every

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day. As the nation grows large number of people purchase and drive their personal vehicle. I certainly agree that drawback of

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worrying trend is more than benefits.

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essay will discuss some merits and drawbacks and examine the consequences of

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trend. As the world is becoming

more fast

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faster

people fight with the

time

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. As the majority of the person is taking a new motorcar.

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has a several benefit of the individual.

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and foremost, as

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car

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the car

makes distances much smaller, which lead to save a human

time

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, they can devote their more

time

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into their work.

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, for those who commuting on public

transport

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have spend quite more

time

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than those who travel in personal vehicle. Beside

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, own means of

transport

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make human more comfortable as they can go countryside as well, where public

transport

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may not be available.

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, there is a plethora of disadvantages of

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situation.

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, as large amount of

car

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increase, which lead to the create pollution

in to

expresses motion to a point on, or within, something

into

the atmosphere.

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, it will affect to human.

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, According the survey of "World Health Organisation" (WHO) there are several diseases

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as Asthma and hearing problem cause from noise and air pollution lead by vehicle.

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, more and

more fulesare

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more flash

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consuming every year we are very close to wiped of natural resources

such

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as fossil fuel and crude oil.

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, as the number of

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owners goes up,

its

it is

it's

directly lead to increase in mishaps on the road. To illustrate, according to research of "national

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agency" more than a quarter of the total people died due to a road accident which is an alarming rate. To conclude

Accept space

increase

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is help to save

time

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and make more comfort for people.

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, it is evident that there are several causes and a variety of negative effects of

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trend which outweigh to their advantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:

personal mobility
convenience
commuting
quality of life
personalized space
carbon emissions
global warming
air pollution
traffic congestion
environmental degradation
resource depletion
electric vehicles
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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Your opinion

All over the world , the rich are becoming richer and the poor are becoming poorer, What problem does this cause? How can we oversome the problems of poverty.

Nowadays there is an increase in social problems involving young people because more parents spent time at work than with their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

You recently completed a course and youu borrowed a book from your teacher which you couldn't return in time. You would like to return the book now. Write a letter to your teacher and say: What book it was. How helpful was the book? Explain why you couldn't return it in time.

Trade and travel would be a lot easier with a single, global currency that we all use. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?