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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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While
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 some people argue that
issues
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 related to the environment should be resolved globally, others believe that
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nations
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 should come forward and try to mitigate
this
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 problem.
This
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 essay will discuss both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter. On the one hand, many people support the idea of tackling environmental
issues
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 globally because they think that it is a global problem.
In other words
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,
issues
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 like global warming, deforestation, etc. Should be dealt
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 on a global scale and the whole world should take the initiative to mitigate these problems.
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, there are different international organizations like the United
Nations
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 that were established to resolve
issues
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 in the world.
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, there are many undeveloped countries in Africa and the Asian continent
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 insufficient or do not prioritize
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 environmental problems.
On the other hand
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, some argue that these
issues
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 should be resolved at the national level. First of all, the powers of international organizations like the United
Nations
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 are limited. They cannot operate or make strict laws for the citizens of any nation
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 means they can only provide aid to the
nations
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.
Moreover
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, it is the authorities of federal governments who are more aware of the environmental
issues
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 in their country.
Therefore
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, they can easily make policy,
according to
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 the situation on a ground level.
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, India has recently announced that
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 will end the use of single-use plastic by the year 2022. In conclusion, there has been a serious debate that
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, should we solve
issues
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 globally or do we need national-level resolutions. In my opinion,
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 the different priorities of different national governments, it would not be easy to run solutions on a global scale.

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task response
Address the opposing view more thoroughly
coherence and cohesion
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Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international cooperation
  • sovereign rights
  • Paris Agreement
  • climate change
  • ocean pollution
  • collective measures
  • economic interests
  • political will
  • enforcement issues
  • free-riders
  • tailor-made solutions
  • transboundary pollution
  • resource constraints
  • global frameworks
  • national efforts
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