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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain in the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, Obesity is a major
health
 concern which is seen in most of the people and day by day the numbers are increasing. Overweight,
un wanted
not wanted; not needed
unwanted
 fat is directly linked to the food he or she
consume
Suggestion
consumes
, and it will cause major
health
 issues when getting old. If we try to research the reasons for obesity, you will definitely observe the influence of Junk food and unhealthy food habits. An
obes
excessively fat
obese
 person will normally face
health
 issues like leg pain, over sweating, heart problems
etc
, when these numbers increase it gradually
effects
have an effect upon
affects
 the
societies
Suggestion
society's
society
health
 system. Some people opine the ideal way to deal with obesity is introducing physical education lessons,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.
e
Suggestion
E
, outdoor exercise and sports, so that the basic lessons
to keep
Suggestion
keep
 fit is learned in the younger age. Normally in schools
their
in or at that place
there
 will be trainers who teach students
on
Suggestion
in
 sports and other basic physical exercises, which is very ideal. I agree
to
Suggestion
with
 the opinion,
its
it is
it's
 vital to introduce physical education lessons in
school curriculum
Suggestion
the school curriculum
 because
its
it is
it's
 the responsibility of a society to
mold
form in clay, wax, etc
mould
 healthy generation.
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