In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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With the advent of technology

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online resources and information have drawn major attention of the society.One

such

advancement is availability of ebooks and e-news applications.Due to

this

, few believe that printed newspapers and books will soon

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their charm.

However

, in my opinion,

this

statement is true only to

certain extent

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a certain extent

. We cannot deny the fact that online material is more economical and readily available.

Thus

, becoming

popular mode

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a popular mode

of mass communication amongst youth and technology sound people.

In addition

, these applications are updated every minute with fresh incidents occurring worldwide.

Hence

, we do not have to wait to read the recent news which will be printed in the morning newspaper

day. One can read the news on the mobile phones while travelling or in the free time in offices on the computers.Need for carrying

printed newspaper

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a printed newspaper

is eliminated.

Also

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students can find their reference books and study material readily online.Expensive novels and unpublished books can

also

be read online.

However

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it is difficult for the seniors and septuagenarians who are not comfortable to operate phones and desktops.They are not technologically sound,

hence

they have increased dependency on printed resources.

In addition

old

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older

people are habitual of reading traditional newspapers

since

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for

decades.

Furthermore

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poor people

can not

cannot

afford

such

expensive equipment.

Moreover

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increased screen reading has resulted in myriad health issues.It has proved to have negative effects on eyesight.Many suffer with headaches and dizziness in early age. To encapsulate,

although

online resources

have proved

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have proven

to be a boon

for

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society, it can not replace the need for printed resources.Both have potential benefits and demerits of their own.

Hence

, the traditional forms of reading

can not

cannot

be entirely eliminated from the society with development of online resources

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