Some people think government should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people prevent illness and disease. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that, living in a polluted environment will cause lots of

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issues.

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has always been an argumentative topic amount people on whether

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should focus on environmental

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and housing problems. In my opinion, by simply improving the environment and housing problems will not cure or prevent people from being sick or improve public

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. Indeed, environment

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and poor condition raise many

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problems.

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, air

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is a major problem in urban area. Due to increase of cars usage and expansion of manufacturing sector, many people suffer from respiratory ailments especially people with asthma. While, in rural area, lack of access to clean water and

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surrounding is their main problem. Their living condition is surrounded by mosquitos they have brought the spread of

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. Overall, if the

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mainly forces on improving their housing facilities and

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pollution

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pollution, disease

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of

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can be avoided.

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, simply forcing to the problem surface will not prevent the

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from happening again. The

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will need to do more than that, they will need to allocate a portion of its budget to investing on vaccine.

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will prevent

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to becoming pandemic.

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that, launch

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awareness campaigns and educate people with basic medical needs will improve public

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. Even if the

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provided housing of

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disease

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will still be a factor affecting the society. In conclusion, there are no doubts that reduce

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and better housing

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benefits public

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. At the same time,

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should

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launch

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awareness campaigns and provide citizen will

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check-up every year to reduce the number of people being sick.