"meeting someone for the first time through the internet is never a good idea. Do you agree?" 250 words

Nowadays, the

internet

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plays a big role in our lives. Making

friends

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on the

internet

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has been popular throughout the world. The

internet

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has become an important tool to connect

people

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with each other. Some

buisnesses

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businesses

also

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rely on

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internet

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marketing to generate leads so

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leads to

people

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meeting

people

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from the

internet

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. Since the

internet

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is so convenient, making

friends

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may no longer be a problem.

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meeting

someone

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from the

internet

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may lead to some troubles because some

people

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may get cheated or blackmailed online.

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strongly agree with the saying that meeting

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for the

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time

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through the

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internet

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is never a good idea

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the following reasons.

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the

friends

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we make on the

internet

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these days are different from the

real life

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friends

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we already know. No one knows what their purpose is. From many past

experience

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, the relationship with

internet

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friends

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does not

last

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long because they often come and go easily.  

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there are a lot of negative

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effects

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or dangers when you meet

someone

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for the

first

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time

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through the

internet

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because you can never be 100% certain of who is on the other end of the

converstion

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conversation

.

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example

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the person can post a picture of

someone

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else and pretend that he is the one.

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is

also

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easy to be vulnerable

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when

you are talking to

someone

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over the

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internet

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for the

first

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time

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,

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because your conversation can flow easily

especially

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during

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communication. You can get so carried away and open up your deepest secrets,

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as sharing

a personal information

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personal information

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or compromising

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with a blackmailer. He will threaten you with sharing it publicly and demand money or more compromising materials.

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Hence

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people

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should be careful of sharing their personal information online with a stranger,

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as addresses,

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, birthdays etc. Parents should

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pay close attention to their children when they are on the

internet

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, teach them about the dangers of making

friends

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on the

internet

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and stop them from going out with strangers.  In summary

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meeting

someone

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for the

first

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time

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through the

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internet

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is not always safe because most of the

friends

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we meet on the

internet

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are not honest

peolpe

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people

. They are more likely to be considered as un-trustful strangers.