"MEETING SOMEONE FOR THE FIRST TIME THROUGH THE INTERNET IS NEVER A GOOD IDEA. DO YOU AGREE?"

Nowadays, making friends on the
internet
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has been popular throughout the world. The
internet
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has become an important tool to connect people with each other. Some
buisness
a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
business
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also rely
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also relies
has also relied
on the
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marketing to generate leads, so
this
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leads to people meeting people from the
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. Since the
internet
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is so convenient, making friends may no longer be a problem.
On the other hand
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meeting
someone
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from the
internet
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may lead to some troubles because some people may get cheated or blackmailed online.
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,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
strongly agree with the saying that meeting
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for the
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first
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time
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through the
internet
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is never a good idea with the following reasons.
Firstly
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the friends we meet online are different from the real life friends we already know. No one knows what their purpose is. From many past experience, the relationship with
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friends does not
last
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long because they often come and go easily. 
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Secondly there
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Secondly, there
are a lot of negative effect or dangers when you meet
someone
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for the
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first
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time
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through the
internet
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because you can never be 100% certain of who is on the other end of the conversation.
For example
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the person can post a picture of
someone
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else and pretend that he is the one. 
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Also it
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Also, it
is easy to be vulnerable
whe
at what time? "When are you coming home?"
when
while
you are talking to
someone
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through the
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for the
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first
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time
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, because your conversation can flow easily especially during late night communication. You can get so carried away and open up your deepest secrets,
such
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as sharing a personal information or compromising photo with a blackmailer.
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(used to introduce a logical conclusion) from that fact or reason or as a result
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, people should be careful
of
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about
sharing their personal information online with a stranger,
such
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as address, photo, birthday etc. Parents should
also
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pay close attention to their children when they are on the
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, teach them about the dangers of making friends online and stop them from going out with strangers. The summary meeting
someone
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for the
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first
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time
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through the
internet
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is not always safe because most of the friends we meet on the
internet
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are not honest. They are more likely to be considered as un-trustful strangers.

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