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The traditional life style of local people in developing countries is attracting and increasing the number of tourists to the countries which has the effect of preventing local people changing to modern ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The given pie
chart
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 provides details of the percentage of Coca-Cola's sales
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in
 5 different countries: namely, North America, Africa, and the Middle East, Asia, Europe, and Latin America in 2000. The line
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 gives information about the number of share prices for Coca-Cola between 1996 and 2001. Overall, it can be seen that Coca-Cola was the most popular in North America, and Coca-Cola's share prices had an upward trend.
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 with the pie
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, The total sales of Coca-Cola was 17.1 billion
while
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While
 North America had the highest
figure
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 at exactly 30.4% which
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were
 more than three times higher compared to Africa, and the Middle East at 7% and significantly higher than Asia by 14%. The
second
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-highest
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 was Latin America
at
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in
 25.7% which
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were
 moderately higher than Europe by 5.2%. Moving to look at the line
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, in 1996 the
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 started at approximately 40$ before increasing significantly to just below 70$ a year later,
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 it decreased slightly by 10$, the
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 rose considerably to a peak at roughly 80$ in 1998. Over the
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 2 years, it dropped dramatically to just below 50$ before rising steadily to finish around 60$ in 2001.
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