Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s fast-paced world, many people believe it is important to keep both the home and workplace tidy, with everything organised and in its proper place. I strongly agree with
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view because an organised environment can improve efficiency, reduce stress, and create a positive atmosphere.   At work, a tidy and well-ordered space allows employees to find tools, documents, and resources quickly.
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saves time and prevents mistakes.
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, in my previous internship, our team
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had a cluttered workspace with unlabelled files and scattered supplies. We often lost important documents, which caused delays in completing tasks. After reorganising the space, labelling folders, and arranging materials logically, we were able to work more efficiently and complete projects on time. A clean workspace
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reflects professionalism and can make a positive impression on clients or supervisors. 
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, maintaining a tidy home contributes to mental well-being. When items are organised and clutter is minimised, it is easier to relax, concentrate, and complete daily tasks.
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, I keep my study area clean and ensure all stationery and books are in their designated places.
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habit helps me focus better
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studying and reduces unnecessary stress caused by searching for things.   In conclusion, keeping both home and workplace organised has practical and psychological benefits. It not only enhances productivity and efficiency but
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creates a more comfortable and stress-free environment.
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, I believe that tidiness should be considered an essential part of daily life

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The view is clear and you give good reasons. Focus more on how tidiness saves work time step by step.
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Add more detail for each reason. For example, explain a small action that tidiness makes easier.
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Use more linking words to join ideas. Add phrases like 'also', 'as well as', 'furthermore'.
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Check small grammar and spelling and try to make some sentences a bit longer.
content
Clear stance and answer to the task.
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Good real-life examples from work and home.
structure
Well organized with intro, body and conclusion.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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