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the money was given and the money was paid of a children's charity in USA in the year 2016 have many difference. do you agree with this statement

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The
rendered pie
Accept comma addition
rendered, pie
 chart depicted the purpose of using and
origins
Suggestion
the origins
 of
amount
Suggestion
the amount
 of
money
 owned by a
children
Suggestion
children's
 charity in the United State in 2016 A glance through the pie chart makes it be obviously
described
Suggestion
describe
 that donated food played the major role in total income sources while most of
money
Suggestion
the money
 was spent for program services in
given year
Suggestion
a given year
the given year
 According
in
Suggestion
to
 the data from the pie chart that the most thoroughly of that organization are demonstrated vital origin if fund owned by that charity was donated food with 86,6%.
Besides
, community contributions were regarded as the
second
 most necessary with 10,4% It is evident that the
amount
 of
money
 coming from program revenue was
third
 highest equal to approximately one fifth of that
originariny
come into existence; take on form or shape
originating
 form community contributions. At
last
, three other
money
 sources that were investment income, government grants, other income took up minor parts with 0,2; 0,2;0,4 respectively The purpose in which fund was used by that charity are
detailedly
showed
Suggestion
shown
 that most of
money
Suggestion
the money
 was paid for program services as it accounted for 95,6%.
Espectally
Suggestion
Especially
, the
amount
 of expenditure for management and general was the lowest with 1,6%. At
last
, fund raising took up the
amount
 of
money
 just nearly double than that of management and general
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