Some people believe that it is better to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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In recent years, people start to get concerned about
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satisfaction
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.
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the majority of people argue that terrible situations that happen in the work
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as lower salary and
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dissatisfaction need to be accepted, I think it is better to get out of that situation and improve it.
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of all, it is not recommended to keep doing the
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in which does not bring any enjoyment in life. It is because every person needs to have something that make them happy
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as a good working environment that can satisfy their life. There are some problems that might happen and cause
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dissatisfaction. As an example, there is a tough competition among the employees.
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, they may lose their position at that
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and the salary that they obtain may decrease,
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make them hard to afford their basic needs due to the small amount of money that they gain.
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, I believe that it is better to fix those aspects and improve it in order to gain higher wages and increase
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satisfaction
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. It can be done by moving to other firms which have the
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that they did previously. Other from that, they might change their
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.
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, they change profession from a businessman into a chef,
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a job
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uncommon in the society.
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, they obtain new skills and
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new experience
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beneficial for their life. Because the
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as a chef is not that popular among the community, there are less competition and with a big interest in that particular
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, they can start to do it and likely to get back their
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satisfaction
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fast and earn higher salaries. In conclusion, I think that the bad situation that happen in the working environment need to be changed as soon as possible and try improving those issues by moving to another company or completely change the
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in order to get back the
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of work and to get huge amount of money.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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