Old Age People should be supported by government or their family

This
is to inform you that I'm feeling uncomfortable with the arrangements provided which
further
leads to the unhealthy environment for work or
study
. I was provided with a twin - sharing place in the hostel and my roommate is of uncooperative nature.The place has common bed and a small
study
table which is not that spacious to be shared and work/
study
comfortably. As I'm a final year student, so need to endeavour on projects and
study
for competitive exams.But I can't concentrate properly while studying as we have to share the same table.
Also
, room is provided with common bed, so I can't sleep well and
study
early morning for my exams.
Furthermore
, he listens to loud music all the time that worsens the room environment even more. I have, multiple times, requested him to slow down the music while I
study
, but he never listens to me. I request you to shift me to single sharing room so that I can concentrate more on my studies and prepare well for my exams to shape my future.Else, if
that is
not possible,
then
please provide with separate
study
area and bed and take necessary action against him so that there is healthy environment to prepare well for the exams.I hope you will take
this
into consideration and address my problems with
this
arrangement. Looking forward to hearing from you.
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