The local newspaper is holding a "best neighbor in the area" competition. Write a letter to the newspaper to recommend your neighbor for this competition. In your letter, Introduce yourself Say whom you are recommending Explain why this neighbor should be the winner of this competition

Dear Sir, As I was flicking through the pages of your esteemed daily, I came across the "best neighbour in the
area
" competition that you are holding in our locality. I would like to recommend
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Deol, my neighbour, as the most worthy competitor in
this
contest. I am Narinder Singh from 321 Bara Dari
area
. My neighbour,
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Deol is a retired army personnel. Ever since he moved into
this
colony, he has brought dramatic changes in our
area
. It is because of him that our
area
is the most beautiful
area
in our city. He has planted more than 100 trees in the neighbourhood and himself nurtured them by watering them every morning and evening. The park in our space was in
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very bad condition. He went from house to house and collected money from all the residents and
then
hired workers to beautify the park. Now all the children play there and he sits there to keep an eye on them. All the people in our field love him because he is
such
a big help. He is always ready to help anyone in need with his time and money. Being from an army background, he is himself very disciplined and is a good role model for all of us.
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Deol rightfully deserves to win
this
competition. I recommend his name once again. Yours faithfully, Narinder Singh
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