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Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking or baking. For them, it is better to study their chosen occupations in high school rather than regular subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is considered that few individuals are more likely to build their educational
career
 which includes practical skills.
However
, for
such
 students, it would be better to select those subjects than choosing the other programs.
This
 essay will strongly support the argument. Every
child
 has its own
caliber
a degree or grade of excellence or worth
calibre
clever
, which might be different from others.
For example
 a
students
Suggestion
student
 who is a highest scorer in the class would have a different mind as well as the field of
interest
 comparatively others. Parents play an important role when it comes to build the educational
career
 of their
child
.
However
, there are some students who are likely to take an
interest
 in humanities subjects
such
 as Arts, Music, they should
given
Suggestion
give
 the free hand to choose their
career
 because the
interest
 plays an essential role in developing one's
future
.
Furthermore
, if the
child
 is uninterested in the specific
field which
Accept comma addition
field, which
 is chosen, definitely it will give the detrimental effect on the
future
 of the student. There are some parents, who force their children to select those fields which have higher scope in the
future
 like engineering, medical, technology, and they think if our
child
 will be enrolled in
such
 programs the
future
 will be bright despite of their
child
's
interest
as a result
 the
child
 gets fail due to which the self esteem of a
child
 becomes low. In some countries, there are student
counselors
someone who gives advice about problems
counsellors
councils
councillors
, in every school which judge the
interest
 of the pupils and according to that they are advised by them to pursue their
career
 according to their choice which has a positive impact on one's
career
. In my opinion, students should
given
Suggestion
give
 a free hand to select their
career
 in order to start their practical life. If they are uninterested they should not be forced by their parents. If they like to pursue their
career
 in cooking and baking, they should be enrolled
to
Suggestion
in
 those programs which are
skillful
 for them.
Submitted by Deema on

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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