Some people say that art subject such as painting and drawing shiuld not be made compulsory for highschool students. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

People would argue that
art
subject
which is vital role part of
student's development
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a student's development
the student's development
for a range of reasons and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
would argue that it should be
compulosory
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a compulsory subject
compulsory subject
subject
in high school. I
complelety
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
argee
be in accord; be in agreement
agree
argue
with the point of view and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will support my opinion On the on hand,
art
is
essential
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an essential subject
essentially subject
subject
for students because it
help
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helps
them to promote
creavity
the ability to create
creativity
and
imaginal
form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
abilities. When you are patient through painting or singing in a play, focusing is
compulosory
required by rule
compulsory
thing.
This
concenstration
the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume
concentration
is
the most improtance
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the most important
the most importance
to study and search as well as working in the future.
Moreover
,
art
allow
student
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students
the student
to show their self is better than math or science because it is
help
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helping
student
to perform thought and feelings without limiting words. If
student
pratice
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
practise
regularly imagination, they will have a total development in the future.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
there are various reasons why
art
subject
should be compulsory in high school.
Firstly
,
skills
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the skills
that students learn from
art
can help them to improve studying
productive
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productively
.
Secondly
, many of
art
activities
such
as founding a band,
paiting
graphic art consisting of an artistic composition made by applying paints to a surface
painting
putting
a cartoon,..
which
Suggestion
Which
asks students to work together. Students have to share
responsibilitis
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
and
dicuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
to gain a common
tagert
a reference point to shoot at
target
.
Finally
,
art
subject
increase solving problem and logical thinking.
For instance
, which is
color
a refrigerator for cooling liquids
cooler
clear
? Which shape? Which size of shape, character in a paint?.
This
create
Suggestion
creates
a decide skills
student
's whole life. In conclusion,
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