Some people say that art subject such as painting and drawing shiuld not be made compulsory for highschool students. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?
People would argue that
art
subject
which is vital role part of student's development
for a range of reasons and Suggestion
a student's development
the student's development
i
would argue that it should be refers to the speaker or writer
I
compulosory
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a compulsory subject
compulsory subject
subject
in high school. I complelety
to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent
completely
argee
with the point of view and be in accord; be in agreement
agree
argue
i
will support my opinion
On the on hand, refers to the speaker or writer
I
art
is essential
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an essential subject
essentially subject
subject
for students because it help
them to promote Suggestion
helps
creavity
and the ability to create
creativity
imaginal
abilities. When you are patient through painting or singing in a play, focusing is form a mental image of something that is not present or that is not the case
imagine
compulosory
thing. required by rule
compulsory
This
concenstration
is the strength of a solution; number of molecules of a substance in a given volume
concentration
the most improtance
to study and search as well as working in the future. Suggestion
the most important
the most importance
Moreover
, art
allow student
to show their self is better than math or science because it is Suggestion
students
the student
help
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helping
student
to perform thought and feelings without limiting words. If student
pratice
regularly imagination, they will have a total development in the future.
a customary way of operation or behavior
practice
practise
On the other hand
,
there are various reasons why Accept space
,
art
subject
should be compulsory in high school. Firstly
, skills
that students learn from Suggestion
the skills
art
can help them to improve studying productive
. Suggestion
productively
Secondly
, many of art
activities such
as founding a band, paiting
a cartoon,.. graphic art consisting of an artistic composition made by applying paints to a surface
painting
putting
which
asks students to work together. Students have to share Suggestion
Which
responsibilitis
and the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibilities
responsibility
dicuss
to gain a common to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
tagert
. a reference point to shoot at
target
Finally
, art
subject
increase solving problem and logical thinking. For instance
, which is color
? Which shape? Which size of shape, character in a paint?. a refrigerator for cooling liquids
cooler
clear
This
create
a decide skills Suggestion
creates
student
's whole life.
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