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Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports starts are paid too much. Do you agree or disagree ? Which other types of jobs should be paid higher?

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Firstly
, the crucial advantage of moving geographically for people at an early age is the understanding and appreciating of cultural differences. Through living in different countries, they learn to immerse themselves in new cultures, get exposed to various religious traditions, and communicate
to
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with
 people with different points of view.
As a result
, they will be more likely to become the true citizens of the world and can adapt well to life in any country they choose to live.
For example
, a new study showed that children who
traveled
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
 with their parents from a young age have developed better cultural sensitivity than those who did not,
thus
 being able to connect and expand their network easily. Living in different countries
also
 forces the kids to cope with a variety of new challenges: making new friends, learning new languages, eating new foods....These experiences turn them into excellent problem solvers in all aspects of their lives.
For instance
, recent research in America
also
 pointed out that people who
traveled
traveled over or through; sometimes used as a combining term
travelled
 a lot when they were young have found more success in their careers thanks to their exceptional problem-solving skills. Those opposed to
this
 say that moving frequently disrupts the children's education when they have to keep on adjusting to a new school every time their parents move to a new place.
However
,
this
 can be solved by the homeschooling alternative. Thanks to the continuous rapid innovation of technology, now parents can equip their children with cutting-edge knowledge through online study courses and resources. On balance, the fact that living in different places from an early age develops the children's awareness of the world around them and their decision-making skills clearly outweighs the concern regarding the children's study.
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