in many societies i the world, the population is ageing rapidly ad this is leading to an unsustainable icrease in the cost of public healthcare. a nation's poulation should ay for their healthcare prvision in the future
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The population is increasing rapidly every year beside
this
health responsibility also
becoming more important. this
is Suggestion
This
also
leading to the problem abut the cost of medical care so people should pay for their own demand for health responsibility in the future. Although
I tend to agree with this
statement, I strongly believe it has both pros and cons for this
tendency. On the one hand, there is no doubt that health insurance is a perfect way to support people about money. It can bring people huge benefits. For example
, it can help people save an amount of money on medical treatments. nevertheless
, if people do not think about any cases soon they will have to take responsibility of finances more if they get ill due to a fact which is impossible for them to go to work and earn a salary. Suggestion
Nevertheless
On the other hand
, the government still ply an important role of providing medical treatments, especially for the old who cannot afford the money because retirements. They need to be treated freely as it is a human right and they can have the best treatments without any worries about the economy. Another point for this
is that without government support, country can be affected by spread diseases. for
instance, while many countries in the world are still facing with corona virus, Vietnam has controlled it completely. All patients are cured even though they cannot afford the expensive cost. To sum up, government need to continue funding to help people. Suggestion
For
however
, people should have awareness about paying for their own demand of medical healthcare.Suggestion
However
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