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Some people believe that children should be involved in educational activities in their free time. Others argue that this puts too much academic pressure on a child. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There is a little room for doubt that a great number of human beings to assure that children have to be encouraged in doing their discipline during their leisure pursue,
however
, others believe that it makes the life of children without a childhood. Arguments for both views will be discussed. Many researches have found that, kids who the
majority
 of their
time
 do educational activity more likely to have anxiety and suffer from depression. Being under academic pressure lead, to be in stress without any spare
time
. In the
majority
 of developed countries children do not have homework in order to not be overloaded with study,
however
, children from countries which is developing
such
 as South Korea, and Malaysia more tends to be stressed.
In addition
 to anxiety, children develop their communication skills by communicating with their peers during their free
time
. Contacting makes them more capable to have a connection with their friend.
Furthermore
, they may meet their friends for the rest of their lives by spending
time
 together. Others believe that, by doing academics the
majority
 of the
time
, their child will be able to communicate with someone by showing their knowledge, despite skills that cannot be taken from books and used in the real world. A huge number of successful individuals convince that they have learned the
majority
 of their
time
, and
that is
 the reason why they are now on the highest position of their career ladder. Parents
also
 consider that spending
time
 on education will be beneficial for their child in order to be hired for a well-paid job. From what has been discussed one can conclude that
dispiting
take exception to
disputing
 the fact that a child who spends a great amount of
time
 on learning would succeed, he may have disorders
such
 as depression, and there is no opportunity to be communicative.
Hence
, I believe that children who do not do an education activity during free
time
 may benefit more in comparison to those who spare
time
 doing academics.
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