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Happiness is considered very important in life.Why is it difficult to define?What factors are important in achieving happiness?

#happiness #life #factors
In
this
 stressful
life
 everyone seeks
happiness
. No one wants sorrow in their
life
 they want to live
life
 happily. When we were youngsters we never knew the importance of
happiness
 as our parents used to work for our
happiness
. But when we eventually grew up we slowly started to understand that we can’t get
happiness
 as a gift we need to know how to enjoy any decisions that you have made one way or the other. No matter how hard you work you will still be unhappy if you don’t know how to seek it.
Happiness
 is very important in
life
. Without
happiness one’s
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happiness, one’s
life
 will be a meaningless. It is always said “When 
life
 gives you lemons, make lemonade” We need to know how to enjoy every movement. It is very arduous to describe
happiness
 or nearly impossible. Because
,
Accept space
,
the meaning of
happiness
 can vary from person to person. It depends on own particular passion or purpose of
life
. We can say that “Nobody can fully understand or experience
happiness
. It is not very complex to achieve
happiness
. It's just our mindset. We need to accept the good. Imagination
also
 helps to find
happiness
. Example
:
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:
- If you are not doing great right now
.
Accept space
.
 Imagine yourself doing great in a few months with
this
 you will get enough motivation to keep it going and
also
 make you happy about your future. People will treat you in the same way as you treat them so
also
 show your gratitude to others. So, In conclusion,
this
 essay state that people should always find a way to be happy. And, Know
importance
Suggestion
the importance
 of
happiness
.
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