The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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that happen

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happen

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happens

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after the construction of an

island

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. From

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overall

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the overall

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perspective

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,perspective

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we may notice how they provide a main route for

tourist

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tourists

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who

are

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interested to visit

this

Linking Words

island

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. Nearby there’s easy access to

reception

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the reception

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area, where every

visitor's

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visitors

visitor

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can pass by for inquiries and concerns. Not by far there’s a restaurant for people. There, they can

hangout

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hang out

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and

have

Unnecessary verb

apply

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taste the best delicacies of

this

Linking Words

island

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serves. In every

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surrounding

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surroundings

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,surroundings

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we may see a lot of

place

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places

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where visitors can

have

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apply

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rest

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a rest

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and enjoy the beauty of

the

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apply

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nature.

Lastly

Linking Words

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the end of

footpath

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the footpath

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see can see the best part of every

island

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. The beach, where there’s

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special part to swim and cool down. More than the changes happen, we can see how the construction

maintain

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maintains

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the natural structure and features of

this

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hundred meter

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hundred-meter

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island

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. And how a place can be developed without destroying its natural beauty.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

154 words

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