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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects

#computer #effects
It is common that youths use the
computer
 more frequently nowadays. A row have been
provoked whether
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provoked, whether
this
 phenomenon brings harmful effects
to
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of
 youngsters. I believe that do more harm than good.
First
 of all, it is true that
computer
bring
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brings
benefit
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the benefit
for
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of
 children learning. As information freely access
on
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to
 online, as well as many applications are designed for self learning or supervising learning progress by parents.
For instance
, parents require their children to learn python or
java
a platform-independent object-oriented programming language
Java
 for a sake of
technological developing modern era
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the technological developing modern era
a technological developing modern era
.
Therefore it
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Therefore, it
 is important
to
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for
 young children to pave the ways with different skills for their studies and career
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
levels
.
However
, regardless of what children are using the
computer
 for, sitting too long in front of the screen would be result in harmful effects of their eyes and back. From the personality development, children will become introverted if they barely community with others in reality. As human interaction cannot be provided by
computer
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the computer
a computer
.
Besides
, it is considerable problem when children addicted to the
computer
 activities involves
violent
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violence
. As children can hardly resist the temptation of
such
 activities
as a result
 of low self discipline and curiosity
,
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,
 they tend to overuse, and
consequently
 their chances of becoming rather intense and a cause of crime according to a scientific research. To sum up, parents
plays
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play
 an important role to educate their children to use
computer
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computers
the computer
 appropriately.
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