Some cities create new housing for their growing populations by constructing a smaller number of high-rise buildings. Other cities create more of low-rise buildings. Which solution is better, in your opinion?

With the growing

population

, many

cities

are experiencing less space available for

residents

and

therefore

creating high-rise

buildings

,

while

some

cities

still prefer the traditional accommodation system

such

as

low rise

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or individual houses. I believe the floor size is completely determined by the

population

density and preferences of

residents

, which we will

further

discuss in detail in the following paragraphs. To embark upon, many metropolitan

cities

are crowded and prefer to stay within the close vicinity of their workplace but because of lack of place, many governments

are preferring

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to build more flats within the same building.

Furthermore

,

high rise

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buildings

come with varied facilities and the major benefit is low cost

That is

to say that, more flats

available

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within the same space to accommodate

large

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number of families. The outcome of

this

is more facilities available within the society at

marginal

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cost.

For instance

, a recent comprehensive study conducted discloses that more and more

residents

are attracted to high-rise

buildings

as

it extends

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more facilities like

gymnasium

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,

supermarket

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,

child

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care

centre

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saves great time for fast-paced city lives. On the flip side, some

cities

dwellers prefer to stay in low-rise

buildings

or individual

apartment

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because of several reasons

such

as privacy and

however

this

might be

compartively

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comparatively

costly for metro city

residents

as the supply is short,

however

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Tier II and Tier 3

cities

have major

population

staying in individual houses with maximum two to three floors as the mostly

residents

have migrated to big

cities

because of work.

To conclude

, the building model completely resides

the

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density of the

population

and individual choices and budges.

However

, most urbanites prefer to stay in

high rise

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building

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buildings

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to avail societal amenities and close

neighbourhood

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