Some people think that women should not be allowed to work in police force ? Do u agree or disagree ?

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According to some, the work in the
police
force is not meant for women. I completely agree with
this
statement as working in the
police
or military can be very challenging and difficult.  
First
of all, the
police
or military
job
is one of the best
job
to serve a nation.
However
, it comes with a lot of demands. One has to undergo a lot of intensive trainings in order to be physically fit. It requires women to be strong and fit to face any kind of dangerous situations.
For example
, about 90 percent of the
police
are males in the United States.
Thus
, as females are physically weaker than males, they are less competent for
this
job
.
Secondly
, the situations and conditions in which one has to work can be very harsh. Being always away from family for months and years, not able to communicate with them at the time of need can be very tiring and draining.
Thus
, women are emotionally vulnerable and fragile to face
such
conditions.
Hence
, they are not the optimal choice for
this
profession
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professional
.
However
, they are good at table works like arranging military documents, counselling etc.
For instance
,
greater percentage
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a greater percentage
of the office works are handled by women in most countries.
Also
, in many countries counselling is done by females as they are very good at
this
kind of
job
.
Thus
to conclude,
although
women are not that competent for the
job
of
police
that requires physical encounters, they are very good at office works and other counselling jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inherent equality
  • law enforcement
  • empathy
  • gender-based violence
  • community relations
  • diversity
  • team performance
  • systemic gender bias
  • physical requirements
  • culture of masculinity
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