All parents want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a children’s future. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Undoubtedly, parents always try to provide their children with better chances regarding their
future
. While some hold that presenting children with skills whilst in schools is a good way to do that, others support the variety of school subjects.
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. One of them is that young pupils are more likely to master a skill when they start learning it at younger ages. Many of them are gifted in terms of skills, meaning that if they were taught these skills, Use synonyms
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as cooking, in schools, they would acknowledge their talents, and, Linking Words
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, many of today’s young learners are doing part-time jobs to support themselves financially. In Linking Words
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, a large number of young students have not figured out yet what they want to become in the Linking Words
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Thus
, teaching them a diverse curriculum will broaden their horizons and allow them to freely choose among different professions without much worrying about not having the foundation of one of these careers.
In conclusion, I believe that schools’ curricula should be balanced between skills and classic subjects as by doing that educators will not limit students’ choices when they want to elect their Linking Words
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