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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community to create a better world to live in to what extent do you agree or disagree

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Today we see in the world of egoism the importance of self interest, which does not pay for human emotions. Some people argue that for a peaceful and happy life in the world as well as within the family, we must go back to the traditional values and ethics. In my opinion, it is essential to remove the materialistic attitude
from
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of
 our society.
To begin
 with, most of the people in the 21st century behave in
an
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a
 respectful and rude manner to the older people and the community. In detail, today, youth are not aware about the importance of respect, whereas they only bothered about their life.
For example
, in the
past there
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past, there
 was a value for the decisions that took by the parents or the elder people in the
family but
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family, but
 in the current era
,
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,
children do whatever they like to do.
In addition
, present days most of the people are envious about the development of others, which may lead to the crimes. The people never concern about the traditional values
such
 as respect, love, honesty as well as non- violence
have
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has
 no role in today's life. The crime reports in the mass media are the best example for
this
. Most of the murders are held because of the selfishness of a person.
As a result
 of
this
 the people do crimes to be
success
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successful
 in their business or their activity. To conclude, when compared with the
past we
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past, we
 are living in a dangerous situation, where no trust and honesty between each other due to the lack of traditional values.
Therefore
, we must retake and continue the ancestors values and traditions to develop a trustworthy and helpful society and family in our world.
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