A person’s health is their own responsibility rather than the government’s responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Instead
of imposing on
government
Suggestion
the government
, it's every individual's duty to maintain once
health
. Because everyone needs are being sincere and faithful to themselves by meeting the necessary requirements for their own
health
. It's impossible for union to monitor on every single person, they can only help the public to regain their
health
by providing the best treatment. I believe that the public must be serious about their own
health
and
fitness
by doing regular exercise and taking balanced diet. As it is said that
health
is a wealth. Keeping
this
in mind, the public must be serious and be responsible about their own
health
. It's every individual's duty and right to be in charge and be master of themselves. Because
health
is a very personal thing which all must try to keep themselves fit.
For example
, in overseas, most of the people are staying single and alone. They are highly cautious about the
health
and
fitness
,
therefore
they tend to join on regular gyms and exercise. I believe that
this
regular routine of theirs is really effective and beneficial in maintaining themselves and they do it faithfully.
On the other hand
, it's absolutely far better that
government
do indulge in every once
health
and worry about pupils'
fitness
as the Union has their own role to play for the nation enlarge. If the union has to be involved in
health
Suggestion
the health
of the person's
then
where is the pupils responsibility for their own
health
and if they don't take care of themselves
first
then
what nation can expect from their citizen tomorrow in building up the country. The
government
could only provide the best facilities for treatment.
For example
, the Union has provided better and advanced
health
related facilities in the country and wish them better
health
and
fitness
. In summary,
health
is a personal responsibility that every one much take care and preserve it. The public must always meet all the measures to keep themselves fit. They should not out
this
burden on
government
and distract them from doing their duties.
Submitted by Anjni on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • personal accountability
  • health outcomes
  • public health campaigns
  • regulations
  • healthcare services
  • environmental quality
  • socio-economic factors
  • governmental intervention
  • healthy living
  • informed health decisions
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