Some people think that children should begin their formal education at very early age and should spend most of their time on school studies. Others believe that young children should spend most of their time playing. Compare these two views. Which view do you agree with? Why?

One school of thought believes that the child ought to be admitted into an institution at the toddler phase of life, whereas most of the people want a youngster to enjoy playing at the beginning stage.

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strongly agree with an earlier part that prefers the offspring to proceed towards education, having real time to learn the skills concisely.

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with, the entertainment at early life supports a youngster to attain maturity level.

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is because a child is exposed to practical life and learns the important characteristics

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as manners, etiquettes and differentiates between right and wrong at small ages;

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, a youngster is probably to behave as a well-mannered candidate later in school.

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, the fun and entertainment at a younger age grows and prepare a mind for the future circumstances.

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, the early studies support a schoolboy to gain skills effectively. A pupil at a current stage is sensitive to catch whatever the teachings are provided.

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a candidate has an exposure of any subject in school, he is likely to study precisely and become successful. Taking my personal example, I had begun studies at an age of 2.5 years and was keenly interested in every subject precisely.

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, the young age helps a schoolboy to learn an education concisely.

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my opinion, the aspects of early schooling of a child to help them build a basic block of education;

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supports them to form a basis for any academic course.

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, the studies at young stage may play vital role in building a strong root for an academic level of study. To reiterate, despite having the arguments of both views. I believe the adolescents are sensitive to get excited towards new stuff, they come across;

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that time must be invested in studies.