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In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, thriller media and violent movies have gained more popularity among the masses than any kind of media. Some people are conscious that it can leave negative effects on the viewers, which can disturb the peace of the society.
On the other hand
, a section of society considers it a harmless source of entertainment for relaxing themselves.
Although
,
this
 is a very sensitive topic. So, before drafting any final conclusion, I will discuss both sides related to topic. Visual memory is stronger than any kind of learning source. It lasts forever while the other ones does not. There was a documentary available on the internet, which describes how ISIS are transforming innocent children into militants by showing them a violent platform of movies.
Moreover
, it is crystal clear how they are getting success if we look most of the terrorist attacks were performed by youngsters.
However
, in
this
 busy world, people want to remove the stress by watching online media. But, they must be conscious of what they are viewing does not have an impact on their morality and the way they behave. After, discussing both the sides of the topic, I came to conclusion that aggressive media has potential to change one's life completely. So, people should be mindful of what they are watching.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • desensitize
  • aggressive behavior
  • glorify
  • artistic expression
  • pent-up emotions
  • media consumption
  • model for conflict resolution
  • fiction vs. reality
  • outlet for frustration
  • conclusive evidence
  • social influences
  • real-world aggression
  • interaction
  • imitation
  • controlled environment
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