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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment in essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Different countries have different constitutions and follow the rules and regulations to deal with
crime
. Some nations are quite rigid in dealing with the
crime
 and the law and order
are
Suggestion
is
 like the tooth of a tooth and
eye
Suggestion
an eye
of
Suggestion
for
 an eye. Some people claim that the death penalty ought to be given to the criminals to save our society from savagery. To a certain extent, I agree with
this
 opinion.
To begin
 with, capital
punishment
 should be given to heinous crimes like drug dealing, murder, and rape in society. Knowledge of
such
 stern can generate fear among offenders.
Thus
, people will think twice before committing a
crime
 and even if it compels them do to so.
As a result
, the number of wrongful activities will drastically decline.
In addition
 to
this
, a rapist destroys the family, the government should arrest
such
preparators
the activity of putting or setting in order in advance of some act or purpose
preparations
 and prevent innocent people. To maintain the equilibrium in society, inexcusable offenders should have the same severity of the
crime
 sometime it should be the death penalty.
However
, Capital
punishment
 is against Human rights. All the living creatures have the right to live and should be given a
second
 chance – criminals are not. Societies use legislative systems to prosecute the criminals and verdict cannot be a hundred percent fair always. To wrongdoing to the from the law itself, the criminals can be given solitary confinement and long prison stances. In conclusion, Capital
punishment
 help reduce
crime
 rates and prevent harsh
offenses
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
offences
fines
, the death penalty is a violation of Human rights. So I feel capital
punishment
 should be given in heinous crimes after being sure.
Submitted by Prahatish Sathyamurthy on

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