Many people work hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or more disadvantage?
Currently there are who prefers to spend more hours working
instead
of taking time
for themselves. Therefore
, there are many benefits and drawbacks that this
situation could have. I think that the disadvantages overweight the advantages. In this
essay, I will argue my point of view.
The main benefits of working a lot hours is people get more money. Because, they do more extra-hours or they have more jobs. To illustrate, normally a person work
8 hours per day, however
, European people tend to work
ten or twelve hours per day. As a result
, they have a higher quality of life due to that they many material things, such
as expensive cars and luxury houses.
On the other hand
, I believe that there are more disadvantages. When people work
long hours during for some time
they get sick because of they do not enough time
to relax. Therefore
, they have countless issues in their health, such
as stress-illness, anxiety and sleeplessness. For example
, in Colombia the 75 percent the workers suffer of any kind of illness due to overtime. Consequently
, they have to spend large amounts of money in test, medical appointments and medical treatment. Besides
, they do not have time
for sharing with their friends, playing some sport or taking a walk.
In conclusion, each person has to decide how to sort their personal time which
could be dedicated to Accept comma addition
time, which
work
or leisure time
. However
, I think that there are more disadvantages than advantages because the health is more important than the money.Submitted by Mauricio Vargas on
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