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, there are many benefits and drawbacks that Linking Words
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situation could have. I think that the disadvantages overweight the advantages. In Linking Words
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essay, I will argue my point of view.
The main benefits of working a lot hours is people get more money. Because, they do more extra-hours or they have more jobs. To illustrate, normally a person Linking Words
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however
, European people tend to Linking Words
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ten or twelve hours per day. Use synonyms
As a result
, they have a higher quality of life due to that they many material things, Linking Words
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as expensive cars and luxury houses.
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to relax. Use synonyms
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, they have countless issues in their health, Linking Words
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as stress-illness, anxiety and sleeplessness. Linking Words
For example
, in Colombia the 75 percent the workers suffer of any kind of illness due to overtime. Linking Words
Consequently
, they have to spend large amounts of money in test, medical appointments and medical treatment. Linking Words
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, they do not have Linking Words
time
for sharing with their friends, playing some sport or taking a walk.
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However
, I think that there are more disadvantages than advantages because the health is more important than the money.Linking Words
Mauricio Vargas