You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your experience. Write at least 250 words

In a few decades the figure of violent crimes around the world grew. Some people believe that it happens due to poverty, unemployment, and

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of methanol. In my opinion the most reasonable way to reduce the problem is to create more workplaces, provide affordable study for people, as well as to reduce the statistic of methanol on the shelves.

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, it is not a secret that huge sum of murders and thefts are happening due to alcoholism.

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, in my home rustic approximately a half of all crimes were related to alcoholism.

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, the impossibility to find a work. For instance

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my provincial Russia has a population of 140,000 people and approximately 25% these people are unemployed. Due to that bad economy, people are motivated to join different gangs or make illegal business to have a living.

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, the sum of crimes is increasing enormously. Solving

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problem is not easy.

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, it would be reasonable to make study accessible for everyone.

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, studies in Russia are usually very intense, your studying schedules leaves you a very limited time to be involved in other activities that are not related to your academics,

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encourages the generation of more civilized and well behaved youths in the rustic, who only think of achieving greater results in their academics than been involved in drugs related and illegal deals. So, if more people are involved in discipline,

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fewer people will commit crimes.

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, raising prices on smoke or reducing the amount of drink in shops will make it harder to find for marginal personalities. It will make Alco less assessable for people with anti-social behaviour and

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make them less likely to commit crimes

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but not least, is creating more workplaces along with economic development. Obviously, because the low crime level is possible only in well-developed countries. To sum up, only by following

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we can decrease crime rate around the world In conclusion, I would mention once again that, people are likely to commit violent crimes due to unemployment, poor economic development of the rustic, and abuse of drink.

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issue can be easily overcome by making affordable study, creating more job opportunities and struggling with

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of booze.