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What health issue are linked to modern lifestyle? What answers to these problems can you suggest?

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Nowadays, many countries around the world has the same problems of
health
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This
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 essay will discuss the reasons that cause the situation and the several methods to solve the problems. There are many reasons for the
health
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 problem.
Firstly
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, due to the development of technology, people need not to do the same physical
work
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 as past. In many companies, employees need to stay in the office to do the
work
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 via computer for a long
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, even over
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, which will lead people do not have much
time
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 to do the exercise.
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, most people prefer to stay home than outdoor activities when they have spare
time
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.
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, play computer games at home for a long
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time, even even
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time, even
 overnight, and watch TV.
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, many people are always living in a stress way which they could not balance their life with
work
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. All of these reasons will lead a negative effect on people’s
health
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. Regarding to the problems, some solutions should be provided in respect.
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 of all, companies should take some actions to construct the facilities of indoor activities,
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 as table tennis.
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, employees should be allowed to have a relaxed
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 after working for one to two hours.
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, labour law or other regulations related to respect for human should be completed by the government.
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, for personally, everyone must pay more attention to their
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 than making money.
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, people better to do the exercise regularly and force ourselves to living in a healthy life. In conclusion, as we know, many people get
health
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 problems due to they are put more weight to
work
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 rather than their
health
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.
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, everyone must build the awareness of doing exercise and eating healthier.
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