Some people believe that reading stories from e-book is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent Do you agree or disagree?

Some people reckon the use of computer for digital reading rather than for playing games and watching
. In my opinion, both are the distinct modes of entertainment and have their own advantages.
, sitting for long on screens can cause eye problems. To commence with, the idea of reading stories online is not only enjoyable but
saves money. Apparently, there is
a plethora
of websites providing free access to a variety of books. Undoubtedly, books are the greatest tool to enhance knowledge and hone aptitude-skills
Accept space
, reading stories
aids in improving imagination, vision and creativity of children. Apart from
, sometimes principal characters in the stories are so inspiring that children venerate them and naturally learn from them. In India, people prefer to read on Goodreads.
, which possess a huge collection of books from various fields. Eventually, children can reap benefits from
books provide enormous information, playing computer games and watching tutorials or technical shows on
are equally beneficial. There are numerous games, namely Sudoku, puzzles and crosswords which are challenging and simultaneously, spurs critical thinking in children.
, there are other task oriented games and
shows that collaboratively develop enthusiasm and patience with students, which is essential in today's life. Despite the countless merits of computer and
, children should not spend much time on screens as it imposes a strain on the eyes which is precarious. To conclude, children should compartmentalise their time and give equal importance to both e-reading and playing on the screens
, parents should monitor their timings and preclude them from sitting too long.
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