Students should focus on learning in the classroom rather than show their status by wearing fashionable clothes. Therefore, all students have to wear school uniforms. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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There is a tendency

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among

students

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some of them prefer to wear clothes Depending on their opinions, While others wear the same clothes the

while

all of something including all its component elements or parts

whole

year. In my view point

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I completely with students who worn fashionable clothes in their schools.

First

of all

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the interest in the wearing clothes and following fashion has many effects for students. The most important impact

is keeps

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keeps

is keeping

has kept

you existed for presence to your school every morning. Some private schools in my city force their students not wear uniforms. The reason is due to encourage to go their schools lovely. On

other hands

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the other hand

other hand

, students who wear

uniforms

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uniform

clothes feel bored and probably their absence may become much and

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students

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student

won't enjoy in their studying. That's why it's important to wear fashionable clothes that makes you beautiful feeling than depends on one clothes to wear the whole year.

Secondly

, there is another impact is student grades. Wearing clothes differently everyday

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this

it helps

thought

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to think

growth. And your mood is above excellent.

For example

, when I was in high school, My boss

put

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puts

open day for us

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which is we can wear anything that depends on our mood

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The reason is due to test us for educational level and

compare

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compared

comparable

to previous days. Indeed

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in open day has become more productive and has got us higher scores. The advantages of wearing fashionable clothes keep students concentration in the study more. To conclude, I strongly believe that no using the same clothes everyday makes students love to study more and their high score.

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