Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming isolated .Discuss both views.
Technology nowadays plays a big part in ones lives.Due to the advent of
internet
and other networking sitesSuggestion
the internet
,
communication Accept space
,
becomes
faster and convenient able to connect with people around the Suggestion
become
globe bringing
each Accept comma addition
globe, bringing
people
togetherSuggestion
person
,
Accept space
,
however some
opine that Accept comma addition
however, some
this
will led
to separation and isolation between people and the community.In Suggestion
will lead
this
essay,
both views will be Accept space
,
discuss
and its impact on Suggestion
discussed
everyones
life.
First
of all,
communication tool like Accept space
,
internet
is significantly trending and increasing.People have an access to connect with Suggestion
the internet
others even
they are distant to each others across other countriesAccept comma addition
others, even
,
able to see and talk their Accept space
,
loveones
at any day in unlimited Suggestion
love ones
time
.Through the use of internet
like messenger,
Accept space
,
skype
and social Suggestion
Skype
medias
, the feeling of homesickness and loneliness as well as a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
psychological effect
like anxiety and depression is prevented. People can make bonding together in a virtual Suggestion
psychological effects
the psychological effect
face
to face
interaction this
promoting a more harmonoius
relationship to their musically pleasing
harmonious
loveones
, and can send messages Suggestion
love ones
thru
chat.To cite an examplefrom beginning to end
through
,
an overseas Accept space
,
workers
working abroad have an easy Suggestion
worker
comminication
with their the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
loveones
wherever Suggestion
loved ones
love ones
time
and location they are and through this
modern technology brought family
closer together.Suggestion
the family
families
Thus
internet
technolgy
has beneficial and positive effect on the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
people
lives.
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peoples'
peoples
On the other hand
,
some think that using Accept space
,
internet
like gadgetsSuggestion
the internet
,
mobile phones and other new media Accept space
,
platforms it
leads to social isolation and separation to other people as well as in the community.Like teenagers they focus their Accept comma addition
platforms, it
time
and mind in playing E games ,watching streaming shows and movies and chatting to people unfamiliar to them this
disrupting their social relationship as well no bonding time
spent with their families as they have their own world outcasted which resulted to separation and detached to the outside world they dont even know what is happening around them because they are more focused and addicted with media platforms due to unlimited internet
connection..For instance
, media survey shows that people especially
younger ones have their modern devices at hand and they Accept comma addition
people, especially
doesnt participate
socially Suggestion
don't participate
doesn't participate
to
some school activities resulting Suggestion
in
to
social isolation, other teenagers spend less Suggestion
in
time
with their family led to conflicts and misunderstanding between family members.Though internet
has its benefits, it also
brought a negative impact on persons social life and detrimental effect on ones
health.
In conclusionSuggestion
one's
,
using Accept space
,
internet
has Suggestion
the internet
positive and negative impact
on the people and its community, it is important to have an open Suggestion
a positive and negative impact
communication whether
personal as Accept comma addition
communication, whether
face
to face
or virtual interaction which lead to harmoniuos relationship
and unified nation.I believe that it is the responsibility of one individual to effectively use Suggestion
harmonious relationships
harmonious relationship
a harmonious relationship
harmonies relationship
internet
in their everydays
lives.found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
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