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the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information has changed a lot since 1981. Do you agree with this statement?

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The given table illustrates the percentage of
children which
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children, which
 given birth by the woman at the age of 40-44 in Australia from 1981 to 2006 Overall, the degrees of one
child
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, two children and without
child
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 levels saw an upwards
trend whereas
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trend, whereas
 the three children and over four ever born to women age 40-45 years witnessed an opposite trend with the others To specify, in 1981 the percentage of none
child
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 started the lowest point at 8.5% and
then
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 went up significantly to 15.9% in 2006. The degree of one
child
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 ever born
to
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in
on
 40-45 years old women accounted for 7.6% during the year 1981. 29% was the
porpotion
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
 of two children given birth by 40-45 years old woman. The degree of three and over four
children
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children's
child's
 levels was
account
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accounted
accountable
 for 27.4% and 27.6
% respectively
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%, respectively
. The year 1986 saw and slight rise
to
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in
 8.7% of one
child
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 level and
then
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 increased to 13.7% in 2006. Degree two children born by women at 40-45 years old minimal rise
to
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in
 38.3% in 2006. Whereas is the other levels in
witnessed
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witnessing
downwards trend
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a downward trend
a downwards trend
 at the end of the period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fertility rate
  • demographic shift
  • age cohort
  • workforce implications
  • government policy
  • birth rate fluctuations
  • education level
  • career advancement
  • reproductive health
  • family planning
  • socio-economic factors
  • population pyramid
  • life expectancy
  • childbearing age
  • maternity leave
  • contraceptive methods
  • population growth rate
  • average family size
  • maternal health
  • census data
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