Nowadays people use social media to keep in touch with others and be aware of news. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

On the other hand
, there
are
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is
a massive amount of fake news on the Net.
Unfrotunately
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Unfortunately
,
percentege
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
of fake news is far
higger
advanced in complexity or elaboration
higher
bigger
than real news. According to a
reacently
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recent
recently
study, false information
coud
requests polite permission
could
spread more rapidly than
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consistent with fact or reality; not false
true
there
three
. Visiting remote places
is becoming
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are becoming
more popular nowadays.
This
kind of tourism offers new opportunities to
travellers but it
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travellers, but it
also
has its drawbacks. In
this
essay I shall discuss the advantages and disadvantages of visiting areas where conditions are rough.
To begin
with, certain landscapes and natural wonders located only in remote areas are unique and cannot be seen anywhere else in the world. No landscape is comparable to the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. If one wants to explore the wild nature and breathtaking scenery, one has to deal with difficult terrain. A clear example of
that is
the testimony of the Norwegian explorer Ann Straus. Straus, after enduring the perils of the Antarctic winter for 6 months describes in his biography one of the most beautiful sunrises ever seen by the human eye.
Thus
, it is evident that there are some worthwhile places where conditions do not allow regular tourism.
On the other hand
, venturing into wild places can be extremely dangerous as well. Many rookie adventurers and travellers perished / lost their lives while exploring unexplored lands.
For example
, the Red Cross warned that in the
last
two decades the casualties related with
this
kind of tourism increased by 75%. It is not hard to see that sometimes the price for venturing into
such
areas is too high. To conclude, some of the most beautiful
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instant communication
  • Geographical separation
  • Vital sources
  • Global events
  • Networking opportunities
  • Interpersonal relationships
  • Digital interactions
  • Misinformation
  • Misiformed public opinions
  • Endanger
  • Excessive use
  • Addiction
  • Mental health
  • Anxiety
  • Depression
  • Loneliness
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