Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides

With the advent of technologies like
internet
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the internet
it has made our life very much easier as compared to the bygone
time
. It is believed that net plays a vital role in
humans
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human
human's
life.As few individual suggest that it had brought people closer together
,
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,
but some people opine that it had made communities more isolated.
this
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This
essay will discuss both the views in detail.
To begin
with, cyberspace has brought the families together living far away through easier and better communication facilities.
there
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There
are many
internet
based applications like
whatsapp
,
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,
facebook
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Facebook
,
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,
instagram
,
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,
messenger
etectra
. Whereas in erstwhile
time
communication where made through meetings or by post, but it was a very long process.
However
,
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,
with
time
to
time
this
has changed.
For instance
, the families of a person living abroad can commune through facilities like
whatsapp
.
Nowdays
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Now days
it has become a piece of cake.
On the other hand
, there are some individual who
suggest
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suggests
that it had made communities more isolated than ever before.
First reason
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The first reason
for
that is
the man is not a social animal as it was before the arrival of new technologies
,
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,
now they prefer meetings through video call
instead
of meeting
traditionaly
according to tradition; in a traditional manner
traditionally
traditional
. The
phycial
involving the body as distinguished from the mind or spirit
physical
touch between them is absent,
this
also
sometime
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
put strain on their mental development.
secondly
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Secondly
, the gap between families are
amiliorating
tending to ameliorate
ameliorating
due to excessive use of
internet
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the internet
. Now
eveyone
all people
everyone
has their personal online platforms as they are spending
colossal amount
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a colossal amount
of
time
on social media. To conclude, every coin has two sides. No doubt, the
internet
has made the planet earth a global
village but
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village, but
the negative consequences of net cannot be ignored.
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