The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

At
present time
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the present time
, In fast growing countries, transportation is
essentials
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essential
part of the individual’s daily
routine
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Routine
. Because of
this
number of vehicles on the road are increased. I personally believe that
government
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Government
has to take several serious steps to prevent
this
. There are many problems
occur
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occurring
through the plenty of vehicles on the road.
First
and for most it harms
the
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The
environment through the exhaust gas from the vehicles.
It
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Its
overall impact on public health. To
prevent
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Prevent
this
initially
, every individual people have to aware about
this
problem. For making people
aware
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Aware
government
have
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has
to introduce free seminars regarding the ongoing situation regarding the traffic.
Secondly
, frequently producing traffic through number of increase cars on
road
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the road
. Its result is to wasting
time
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Time
in traffic and getting late to reach the destination.
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