Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In recent years, the question of whether people should prohibit extreme sports or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention.
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prohibition appears plausible in some ways, intense sports should be welcomed more. It is hard to deny some negative effects of these sports.
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, sports like sky diving and skiing would be detrimental to physical and mental development.
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the inherently dangerous nature of vigorous sports can threaten lives, it causes serious injuries, traumas and fatal situations.
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, it charges players a great amount of money for partaking in extreme sports.
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, to involve in, players have to pay much money
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for
participate
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participating
fees, insurance fees and so on, which are prohibitively expensive that not many people can afford.
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, under no circumstances should the benefits of intense sports be marginalized.
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, since the fundament purposes of these sports is to practice and strengthen survival skills, following is necessary.
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, pilots have to undertake rigorous training to parachute or in heavy-snow countries, skiing is a basic skill for
habitants
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the habitants
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, by using protective equipment
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as helmets and breaks, players can ensure their security in some ways. In fact, that the proliferation of these equipments enables people to pursue dangerous sports is a facilitator of enhancing
human’s ability
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the human’s ability
to have the autonomy to take part in any recreational activities. In conclusion,
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the demerits of extreme sports are recognized, these pale into significance when compared
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with
the merits.
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, imposing a ban on these sports is not necessary to reduce the downsides of dangerous sports.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • risk threshold
  • thrill-seeking
  • safety protocols
  • hazard assessment
  • adventure tourism
  • regulatory framework
  • personal autonomy
  • informed consent
  • risk mitigation strategies
  • thrill-seeking behavior
  • protective gear
  • extreme athleticism
  • freedom of choice
  • accident prevalence
  • emergency response
  • courage and resilience
  • endorphin release
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