Write a letter of application to mrs hopkins the oganizer of the trip,telling her: -why would you like to go on the trip -what skills do you have -what previous experience

Dear
mrs
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Mrs
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hopkins
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Hopkins
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, I am writing
this
letter to apply for the being a player in your travel competition which
i
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saw advertised
on
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the newspaper. I want to go on the trip because
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I
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can explore
to
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another country and meet new friends.I have been
play
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playing
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a lot of exploring
game
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before so that
i
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I
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am confident of my skills
such
as: go for a hunt or climbing the
moutine
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routine
mountain
.
Last
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yeari
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year
year I
joined a competition of hunting animal
anh
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and
i
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am the winner.
Therfore
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Therefore
,
i
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am patient and
skillful
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enough to be a brilliant player. I would highly appreciate
if
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it if
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you accept my letter.I am looking
foward
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forward
to hearing you in the near future. Yours faithfully, Linda
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